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shalom ([personal profile] shalom) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-03-26 02:57 am (UTC)

Well, THAT was a 3-tissue story for me! *sniffs*

Wonderful job, Brig. You have a way of bringing the reader along and feeling what he's feeling - particularly the inadequacy and the anger. It's absolutely fantastic that the girls offer him a way to heal on this one.

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