ext_2389 ([identity profile] thady.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-06-09 06:36 pm (UTC)

Oh, this is wonderful!

“Is, uh--” Ray was staring at him with a certain heavy-lidded fixity. “Is it just me, or did we kinda have a moment, right there?”

“Yes. Ah--” Moment, what did he mean by moment? Had he noticed? “Do you, ah--”

“Wanna have another one?”

“Yes.”


This is so funny. I love your character voices here. :)

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