ext_6556 ([identity profile] arrow00.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-06-13 10:52 pm (UTC)

eee! this was wonderful.

He said something, even quieter, that might have been, “Not the Consulate,” or maybe, “Hate the Consulate.”

moobie!!

“Oh, I think your turtle is very loyal, Ray.”

::nods vehemently::

As a boy, he’d made up his mind never to marry, seeing no way to follow his father’s footsteps into the RCMP without also abandoning his family.

I can so see that, and that Janet would present an almost impossible solution. And then we see Fraser inching closer to a realization of who would be most perfect of all.

Perhaps a great deal of what he’d taken for existential angst was merely low blood sugar.

!@! heh. Love how this evokes the "inner ear imbalance" line.

love Fraser's scattered thoughts during the kiss.

very nice!

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