ext_3043 ([identity profile] cathalin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-06-19 03:52 pm (UTC)

This is absolutely *gorgeous*, and moving for me to read even though I have no idea who these people are, none. Wow, Sage, just, wow. So much beauty - I particularly loved "doesn't second guess Ray Kowalski's hands" and the thumb brushing "incandescent over Fraser's right cheek," but the whole thing is chock full of amazing writing.

Go, you! \o/

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