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ext_3554 ([identity profile] keerawa.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-06-21 12:00 am (UTC)

This is great! I love your descriptions of his early memories and first change. The idea of Fraser's having two selves, one human and the other wolf, was really compelling. I felt it perticularly strongly here: Dimly, I remember that making noise like this is something I try to discourage when I'm human, but fuck that, I just want to run.

Wolf!Fraser and Dief jumping on Ray for some payback ear-licking made me lkaugh. And that sex was tasty! Nice job, luzula!

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