ext_3123: Ray Kowalski, slightly forlorn (Big Damn Heroes Kowalski)
ext_3123 ([identity profile] ifreet.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2010-02-12 03:58 am (UTC)

Oh, this is a lovely story. You've really tied the werewolf concept into Fraser's character -- his outsider status, the particular types of clues he notices (smells, tastes), his relationship with Dief.

And I loved that the revelation of his nature to Ray was both necessary for keeping their partnership and led so readily into the change in their relationship. Beautiful!

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