Wow, hugely enjoyable. So much to love in this story. It's dramatic, angsty and psychologically true, while at the same time funny and kooky in the best dS tradition.
I love your not squeaky clean Fraser, complex, possesive, competitive, selfish but also oh so honerable and selfless and a true friend and good man.
Good job on showing Ray's interest in Fraser and pursuit of him, while making it clear Fraser doesn't get it. Oh, and I love that Fraser believes in magic, it's something I've always wanted to see explored more in fic.
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Date: 2008-08-03 11:21 pm (UTC)I love your not squeaky clean Fraser, complex, possesive, competitive, selfish but also oh so honerable and selfless and a true friend and good man.
Good job on showing Ray's interest in Fraser and pursuit of him, while making it clear Fraser doesn't get it. Oh, and I love that Fraser believes in magic, it's something I've always wanted to see explored more in fic.