What an incredibly original idea! And the execution of it - incredibly layered. There's so much here in so few words, I really cannot express my thoughts properly. Your language, your characterisation and character voices, and the subtle (because of how complex and ambiguous it is) yet very real (and, to a degree, shouting) moral dilemma you present - wow. You've managed to call forth so many different emotions and feelings with this, it really is. Incredible.
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