God, what a story you have written. I just want to wrap myself in this. The flow of the language is seductive and enthralling and perfect. You manage to accomplish this beautiful fairy-tale of a story, while still introducing these humorous touches of Ray, while showing us the growth of a relationship, the realization of love. The fact that it all works this well is such a credit to your talent as a writer (whoever you are and it is so frustrating, because I am certain I know who you are and it is just tapping away at the back of my head).

You know, the funniest thing about this story is that it's the last type of story I generally enjoy, but I never wanted it to end. Thanks for a wonderful read.