ext_6168 ([identity profile] troyswann.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-09-06 05:50 pm (UTC)

It's very cool to see a story from Welsh's point of view. I like the descriptions of his way of managing--by pointedly being seen to be watching, and then sometimes pointedly not being seen. The glimpses of post-Vegas Vecchio are telling and the sidewise view of their developing relationship and the return of Fraser is a really interesting way of mapping out the story. Very cool.

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