ext_28288 ([identity profile] leafy22.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-09-15 07:37 pm (UTC)

This is such a moving story.

This scene was so heartbreaking -

Ray lets go of him for a second to pull one glove out of his pocket.

"Take this. You can hold it and we'll pretend you're holding my hand. Will that help?"


but I love the hopefulness of the ending.

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