ext_24985 ([identity profile] captanddeastar.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2009-01-12 01:13 pm (UTC)

Wow - I am so impressed with and touched by this story.

I love how, even though this story isn't very long, Ray goes from being surprised that his "power" treats Fraser the way it used to treat Stella, to being utterly confident in the last scene of his feelings for Fraser - and it's totally believable, the change doesn't feel rushed or artificial at all.

Great story!

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