Date: 2008-09-02 11:56 am (UTC)
I like the structure and the descriptive nature of the story--the images of Texas are very strong. I also like Ray's comment about both Fraser and Stella wanting him to quit undercover work, and the little touches that show how he's settling down (typing up case notes on the laptop, reading the book contract, etc).
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