oh, this is AMAZING! the voice is incredible, and i love the ways you've tied the development of their sexual relationship to fraser's reserve about EVERYTHING. and there were SO MANY beautiful lines in here, i'd have to pull-quote the whole thing into this comment to list them all.

just as a for-instance:

It feels like you got your hand wrapped up inside me and maybe when you ride off into the snowset you'll forget to let go.

oh, that's a heart-twist, and GORGEOUS.

WOW. just...WOW. i will be re-reading this many times, i predict.

&hearts