Beautiful funny writing. And my very favorite thing is that--Fraser warned that the sex was not going to be spectacular, and I cynically thought, "Oh, but it WILL be, because, fanfic!"--and then it WASN'T. Which is so, so, so much hotter than "everything is perfect and sparkly." YAY YAY YAY. I love Ray in this so much, afraid he's pushing too much and afraid NOT to push, and honest enough to tell Fraser when it hurts and then secure enough to razz Fraser about being happy about the honesty, and just--WONDERFUL.
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Beautiful funny writing. And my very favorite thing is that--Fraser warned that the sex was not going to be spectacular, and I cynically thought, "Oh, but it WILL be, because, fanfic!"--and then it WASN'T. Which is so, so, so much hotter than "everything is perfect and sparkly." YAY YAY YAY. I love Ray in this so much, afraid he's pushing too much and afraid NOT to push, and honest enough to tell Fraser when it hurts and then secure enough to razz Fraser about being happy about the honesty, and just--WONDERFUL.