ext_9282 ([identity profile] suchthefangirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-09-05 01:19 am (UTC)

This was great.

Ray was so very Ray. And poor Fraser who is so broken.

I loved that in the end things weren't perfect, but they were getting better, which is what reality is all about.

My only complaint is that I wanted more. I wanted to hear more of the stories that Fraser told when Ray was asleep, I wanted more of Fraser learning what he wanted and asking for it, and I wanted more of Ray giving it to him.

(did you notice how I am hinting that I would love a sequel? subtle, huh?)

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