Stars ([identity profile] simplystars.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-09-04 02:26 am (UTC)

Oh, wow. That packed quite the wallop. o_O And yet the hopeful ending, Fraser's determination that Ray is sick, yes, but not dying - I needed that hope, so thank you ever so much for providing it. &hearts

I liked the use of various POVs; and even though he's not my POV character I think I was most affected by RayV's voice. And the end scene certainly puts a wonderfully neat spin on the morning-after cliche, doesn't it? :D

Yay you! \o/

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