Wow. This is beautiful. It feels refreshing with a shorter fic after all the long stories in the Match. The structure is wonderful, and I love the way you go between Stella's POV and the memories of the men. Though I wondered a little why we got Fraser's and Kowalski's memories and not Vecchio's.

I like Stella here, a little world-weary, but it still seems like she's moving on.

I particularly love the passage of Fraser in the car post-MotB, there are just so many lovely images there.