ext_10202 ([identity profile] pdxscaper.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-09-12 05:09 am (UTC)

Amazing story. Beautiful writing. I love the contrast between Stella's POV and memories. The rich language/writing evokes such melancholy.

Excellent story.


She should have known better, seen the ways that Ray and Ray (one Ray, two Ray, old Ray, new Ray) were the same underneath. She marries men addicted to things hidden, and is too old this time for farewells.
I love this.

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