ext_14366 ([identity profile] sisterofdream.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-09-10 10:44 pm (UTC)

Wow. Absolutely brilliant premise. I'd love to see more stories in this world featuring just about anyone, really.

The story is incredibly well written, and it feels so tangible. The images and the sounds of voices, the feeling of wind, it's all so solid, like we were dropped into this fully formed world just as Ray was.

And oh ow for everybody! Dead or doomed to forget! But there's hope, right? I'm not imagining the hope? *clings to hope*

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