I'm sorry to hear you had to skip some parts. I'd be interested to know which ones. As I said to meresy above, one person's squick is another's kink, or at least another's interesting moment.

The mysterious green stuff was based in part on green-swamp-juice vitamin stuff that I drink, which does not in fact smell bad but looks pretty atrocious, and which is indeed staining and is full of chlorophyll, etc. A green food thing! :) That incident came about because of my prompt: "I never said they were poisonous."

Thank you for the thoughtful comments! \o/