Oh. My. God. This is killer. Let's see: it's smart, it's funny, it's creative... and it's evil. It is wonderful in all the best ways.
I think I smiled through the entire thing. Clone!fic is such a risky thing to write - largely because it has this tendency to be incredibly boring - but this was so much fun. You wrote all of these hilarious misunderstandings and, in filtering them through Ray, made them twice as funny.
The differences between real!Fraser and clone!Fraser were highlighted in all of the best ways. Which brings me to the point that your characterization just rocked and the little barbs you placed on it occasionally were great; I loved Fraser going all alpha (as we all did, I think). There are a million things I could pick out. But, if this is how Match had to end, well... I think this was an obvious way to end it. Amazing story. I'll definitely read it again when this is over and I know who you are (I actually have no idea, believe it or not).
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I think I smiled through the entire thing. Clone!fic is such a risky thing to write - largely because it has this tendency to be incredibly boring - but this was so much fun. You wrote all of these hilarious misunderstandings and, in filtering them through Ray, made them twice as funny.
The differences between real!Fraser and clone!Fraser were highlighted in all of the best ways. Which brings me to the point that your characterization just rocked and the little barbs you placed on it occasionally were great; I loved Fraser going all alpha (as we all did, I think). There are a million things I could pick out. But, if this is how Match had to end, well... I think this was an obvious way to end it. Amazing story. I'll definitely read it again when this is over and I know who you are (I actually have no idea, believe it or not).