ext_19645 ([identity profile] love-jackianto.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-09-15 03:44 am (UTC)

I really liked how you combined the Original CotW Shooting Script and the ending we got to see. Life is but a dream, indeed.

Ray has been undercover so long he almost forgot that he could do that – make his own choices.
Great line.

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