ext_12399 ([identity profile] ardent-muses.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-02 11:14 pm (UTC)

I love your betas. Well, I know Carla's one, and she knows I love her, but I love the other ones also, whoever they may be. :)

I don't know how you did it, but you actually had me holding my breath when they were on the phone. I could feel Ray's nervousness like it was my own, even though I knew Ben would react just as he did. Tremendous.

And the sex is economically written, and very specific to the characters, and pretty darn hot, too. :)

I enjoyed this *very* much. Thank you!

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