ext_18485 ([identity profile] rubyrosered.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-03 09:19 pm (UTC)

Yay!! I've been watching for this.

The first part was terribly painful, in a really great way. I feel so bad for them, but I love story, especially the dialogue. Still, I was very glad you promised more.

And this just caps it off perfectly! It's still very painful, but a happy ending makes it all worthwhile.

Of course, I have to admit I'm a little curious about the follow-through, what with all that momentum Fraser's got going now. But I guess that part wouldn't really involve a telephone, huh?

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