ext_12399 ([identity profile] ardent-muses.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-05 12:42 am (UTC)

Oh dear. This made my heart rate speed up. My adrenal gland thanks you kindly for the workout. *G*

Effective dialogue. Great pacing. I thought you left it at a very effective place.... but I still want the happy resolution. Please.

I can see this isn't part of the project we talked about, so I'm kind of torn. I'm looking forward to seeing THAT finished, but also more of this.

Could you please clone yourself? I'd appreciate it.

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