Shay (
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2003-06-05 12:45 pm (UTC)
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My adrenal gland thanks you kindly for the workout.
And my liver sends a how-de-do and says "happy to oblige."
Effective dialogue. Great pacing. I thought you left it at a very effective place.... but I still want the happy resolution. Please.
Oh, I don't know. I figure Ray is in such a hurry to rescue Fraser that he runs a stop sign and gets into a horrible accident.
No, no, just kidding. Really. I think.
I can see this isn't part of the project we talked about, so I'm kind of torn. I'm looking forward to seeing THAT finished, but also more of this.
Yeah, since the other is an AU, a lot of backstory would have to change. No - this is separate, but thank you. Twice.
Could you please clone yourself? I'd appreciate it.
Okey-dokey. Will do.
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And my liver sends a how-de-do and says "happy to oblige."
Effective dialogue. Great pacing. I thought you left it at a very effective place.... but I still want the happy resolution. Please.
Oh, I don't know. I figure Ray is in such a hurry to rescue Fraser that he runs a stop sign and gets into a horrible accident.
No, no, just kidding. Really. I think.
I can see this isn't part of the project we talked about, so I'm kind of torn. I'm looking forward to seeing THAT finished, but also more of this.
Yeah, since the other is an AU, a lot of backstory would have to change. No - this is separate, but thank you. Twice.
Could you please clone yourself? I'd appreciate it.
Okey-dokey. Will do.