ext_1677 ([identity profile] halimede.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-04 02:38 pm (UTC)

Thanks! :)

I like the setup enough that I actually wondered myself what would happen next, but on the other hand I worry that a sequel would spoil the suspense of the ending. I mean, what can top this moment?
I like how you slotted it into canon, BTW, with Ray leaving in the end. I hadn't thought of that. But then, ::looks sheepish:: I pretty much thought that it was the law that any fic with a pregnant Vicky ended with our guys happily adopting the baby together. ;)

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