This is just amazing! I love how you took Fraser back to Fortitude Pass, but with Ray. And all the poetry is lovely, and the imagery of the storm and the cold is so well written and it's so . . . intense, I think is the word I'm groping for.
I could quote all of it but especially loved this flash of humour.
"I don't think it's an inner ear imbalance this time, Ray."
Ray stared at him. "You're a freak."
Just so Fraser. And I love that Ray finally gets that when they're saying that what they're really saying is I love you.
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This is just amazing! I love how you took Fraser back to Fortitude Pass, but with Ray. And all the poetry is lovely, and the imagery of the storm and the cold is so well written and it's so . . . intense, I think is the word I'm groping for.
I could quote all of it but especially loved this flash of humour.
"I don't think it's an inner ear imbalance this time, Ray."
Ray stared at him. "You're a freak."
Just so Fraser. And I love that Ray finally gets that when they're saying that what they're really saying is I love you.
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