ext_6156 ([identity profile] j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2009-05-16 03:08 am (UTC)

Just lovely.

Fraser looked up then, his mouth maybe an inch from Ray's, and Ray knew this was the part where they kissed and made everything complicated for the rest of ever.

Hee! Yeah.

Someone wrote a terrific poem by the same name, you might want to look it up. In the Genre challenge, possibly not the most recent one, though. I'm thinking some time in 2007, probably.

Anyway this is quite different and uniquely wonderful. :) I love the reiteration and reclaiming of Fraser's Victoria myth. It isn't an inner-ear imbalance, indeed. :)

Thanks for sharing this.

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