prudence_dearly ([identity profile] prudence-dearly.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2009-05-17 03:10 am (UTC)

This is just so beautiful. The atmosphere is stunning, and the counterpoint of occasional humour is perfect. (One fish, two fish!! PERFECT!)

I, like others, just love
the more layers of cloth and fur and warm they bundled up in, the more got stripped away.
And the fact that they now communicate completely, and Fraser is no longer an impenetrable mystery. No more Mountie mask. And he doesn't mind.

and instead of kissing Fraser he said in a rush, more soft and intense than he'd maybe said anything ever, "Let me stay."
Oh, my heart.

*applause and applause*

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting