ext_20677 ([identity profile] gloriana.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2009-05-18 03:02 am (UTC)

Second time I've read this - third, maybe - and I love it more each time. Loved the idea of them becoming more transparent to one another; loved the intensity with which Ray tells Fraser that this is the true thing (and how simply you put that across); loved, of course, Fraser sucking Ray's fingers; and the moment when Ray's watching the aurora is just magical.

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