ext_28386 ([identity profile] mizface.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2009-05-20 11:22 am (UTC)

That was too fun! I love how Frannie, Huey and Dewey became a Greek chorus for this, and how just totally clueless Dewey was.

And RayV should have *known* he'd have to apologize to the Goat, really. Silly man. And a big AWWWWW! for the kiss.

The ETO thing stopped me for a millisecond, then I realized who said it and went - got it, not a typo, move along.

Great story!

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