Eee, this is delightful and made me grin so much! There's a kind of zing in your writing that I really love. You should write MOAR. *greedy*

Like, I love these lines:

"Yeah? You been obsessin' about my hair a lot there, Benton buddy?"

"No," Fraser protested hotly, as though Ray had just accused him of sliding down the consulate banister in his underwear. "No, I have not, why would I obsess over your hair, Ray? What a ridiculous--"

Fraser, you are busted!