ext_8747 ([identity profile] pollitt.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-07 11:08 pm (UTC)

LOL!

Thank you!

Now I'm picturing Fraser adding little flag decals to his phone
Orginally, there was a few more lines to the story:

...

Does it come in red?

With maple leaves, Benton-buddy.

Let's go.


Hee. But the ending worked best where it was.

And for the second suggestion, I could just see it, it's god-awful-early-in-the-morning and Fraser gets a phone call, he jolts up out of bed and Ray mumbles into the pillow to get his ass back in bed ;)

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