ext_16416 ([identity profile] kist.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-07 10:40 am (UTC)

Love this. I could feel Ray's tension after his unintentional slip over the phone. The Tokyo time was a nice addition, and I especially enjoyed the tag at the end. Fraser must have bolted out of there. *happy sigh*

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