ext_27700 ([identity profile] eotu.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2010-05-05 02:12 am (UTC)

This is AWESOME!!!!!

So many quotable lines: "Christ on a crutch," Kowalski complained, "you let a guy touch your eyeballs and he thinks he owns you!"

The entire bull pen went silent. Every detective in the room stopped, turned, and stared, like a herd of startled wildebeest checking out the lions on the African savannah.

Ray and Kowalski looked at each other for a second and then burst out laughing.


and

"She's your mother, Kowalski. Arizona is not far enough away for you to be safe from your mother. China is not far enough away for you to be safe."

and so many more.

This is probably The. Most. Perfect. Ray/Ray story EVAH!!!

YAY YOU!

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