ext_3548: (not shy)
Shay ([identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-15 03:39 pm (UTC)

There are way too many great lines for me to point out the ones I especially like, so let me say I like the whole damn thing, too many words or not! What kills me particularly is that Ray keeps talking after Fraser has kissed him twice -- which struck me as hilarious. I adore Ray's inner monologue. This is great.

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