ext_29449 (
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2003-06-16 12:28 pm (UTC)
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Oh, the characterization was so wonderful. Even in the context of the 180 degree challenge.
“Fraser.” Real calm. Scary calm. This-close-to-kicking-him-in-the-head calm.
This is so Ray. All nervous and angsty and about to blow. Very good voice. And Fraser was great in his distraction.
“You just haven’t been here.” He cocks his head to the side. “I’m sitting right here...”
Good, good work.
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“Fraser.” Real calm. Scary calm. This-close-to-kicking-him-in-the-head calm.
This is so Ray. All nervous and angsty and about to blow. Very good voice. And Fraser was great in his distraction.
“You just haven’t been here.” He cocks his head to the side. “I’m sitting right here...”
Good, good work.