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2003-06-16 10:35 pm (UTC)
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I'm very behind this week, so I missed all these, but I'm SO glad I read this.
Distracted, about-to-make-the-first-move Fraser pushed a number of my buttons and more importantly, you did a terrific job with the challenge premise.
“I’m…right here, Ray,” he says slowly. Like maybe you’d talk to a mental patient. “Next to you. In the car,” he clarifies, just in case I missed it.
Wonderful!
I hope you write more RayK -- he's fun, huh?
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Distracted, about-to-make-the-first-move Fraser pushed a number of my buttons and more importantly, you did a terrific job with the challenge premise.
“I’m…right here, Ray,” he says slowly. Like maybe you’d talk to a mental patient. “Next to you. In the car,” he clarifies, just in case I missed it.
Wonderful!
I hope you write more RayK -- he's fun, huh?