bethbethbeth.livejournal.com ([identity profile] bethbethbeth.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-20 11:53 pm (UTC)

Welcome to the party; what a cool introductory entry!

I'm especially fond of this:


3:20PM DISPATCH: 10-64: "Detectives Huey and Dewey need assistance over at Simpson Pharmaceuticals, 79th and Essex. Something about the Mountie’s tongue better than forensics..."

3:20PM "See what happens when you lick things! 10-4."


Hee.

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