ext_31439 ([identity profile] shyday.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-23 06:39 pm (UTC)

nice work. tight, but still hinting at boundless character traits and plot elements. the revealing tip of a bigger story, wrapped neatly in a single scene. thank you.

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