ext_12399 ([identity profile] ardent-muses.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-23 09:09 pm (UTC)

I love this vivid, tense little scene. The paper cuts on Ray's fingers are a wonderful detail -- as if it wasn't hard enough looking at this sad stuff. Poor Ray.

Really nice.

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