ext_1032 ([identity profile] mei-x.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-06-28 09:49 pm (UTC)

When Ray doesn't know she's looking he looks at her like she's the best thing that could ever happen to a guy. And she's going to be.

I really like this. So often, I'm inclined to dismiss Stella and not care about her motivations, but pieces like yours makes me care.

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