ext_12440 ([identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-07-26 02:49 pm (UTC)

This is so, so sweet and good. Yeah, of course Fraser wouldn't be so perfect at head the first time...it's complicated, there's a lot to think about! And I really particularly liked that even though Fraser really didn't know what he was doing, RAy was still so utterly turned on by it (except for, um, the teeth ).

And I think this is the sweetest thing in, oh, ever:
Yes," he says, praying it's the right answer, and it must be, since Ray's arm tightens across his chest for a moment. Love it. Great story.

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