ext_132463 ([identity profile] 7ying.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-10-07 01:53 pm (UTC)

Love the calm and tender tone here flowing through within. When reading this story, I could hear the shouts, screams and sirens outside everywhere, yet between them there was peace. Something eternal blossomed out suddenly, shimmering in a split moment of life.

Perfect.

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