First Breath

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

Be sure to put on your wading boots. You wouldn't want to ruin your pretty new shoes in the ankle deep schmoop. 376 words.


I wake up as the bed creaks and dips, and a warm, heavy weight gets in beside me. "Frase?"

"Mmmmn?" He's been working all day, and he's tired, already half-asleep.

"How'd it go?"

"Quite well. The party was a success. As a matter of fact, the ambassador was most pleased with..."

"Not that, Frase." I can smell fruity, expensive perfume in my bed, all over him. I have a pretty good idea what the ambassador was most pleased with.

As if to reassure me, he leans forward, draping one arm across my body, settling comfortable and strong on my hip. He snuggles in against my back, and I feel him losing the conversation, falling asleep.

"The other thing," I say, loudly enough to bring him back to full consciousness. "Did you talk to Frannie?"

He exhales, his breath warm on the back of my neck. "Yes. I did."

"And? What did she say?"

I can hear him blushing, in the dark. "I'd rather not repeat what she said, Ray. But I did notice that she didn't appear to be entirely surprised, by...by the situation. She was upset that we...that I hadn't explained it to earlier." His voice dips low on the end of that sentence, sounding genuinely sorry.

And I am too. Genuinely sorry. It's not like I don't know how much it hurts sometimes, being in love with Fraser. "What did you tell her?"

Fraser stumbles a bit, confused by the question. "Tell her? I told her that I love you, Ray."

There's a weight off my chest suddenly, I'm breathing easier, like an elephant that I didn't know had been sitting there just got up and walked away. "Yeah?" I ask him.

"Yes," he answers. "Was that wrong? I didn't think that..."

"No," I interrupt him quickly. "It wasn't wrong at all."

He shifts a bit in the bed, finding his comfortable spot. His hand slides down onto my thigh. "Goodnight, Ray."

"Night." After a pause, I add, "next time I'll make sure I lock the door."

"That's probably a good idea," he agrees.

"Or I'll talk to Ma Vecchio. She shoulda taught Frannie how to knock."

"Even better idea, Ray," Fraser whispers softly. And just like that he's asleep, wrapped around me.

~fin.

Comments

[chesamus.livejournal.com]

Ahhh. That was just lovely, and no boots needed.

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

Thank you. :)

[akite.livejournal.com]

Awww...Show me the schmoop! ::g:: ::whispers:: And Frannie should be taught how to knock.

[bethbethbeth.livejournal.com]

Very sweet (and *not* schmoopy! *g*). This story has such a strong physicality; I can feel the weight and warmth of their bodies in that bed. Nice work.

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

Compared to the angst-orama that I usually write, this is Schmoop City. Thanks!

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

He can. Lots of practice. :) Glad you liked.

[imkalena.livejournal.com]

AWW! Me likes lots.

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

Yay!

[silverakira.livejournal.com]

Mmm, leaves me with a feeling of warm fuzzy contentment. Heh. And I loved the whole "locking the door thing" with Frannie. I can just imagine the scenario. [grin]

[mergatrude.livejournal.com]

Warm fuzzies over here too!

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

Then my work here is done. :)

[wildmachinery.livejournal.com]

Perfect schmoop! This was adorable. Great job.

-mercy

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much.

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Schmoopish, perhaps. Or schmoopesque. But not too schmoopie, heavens, no. Like the baby bear's bed, it's just right.

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

Hee. Suddenly I feel the urge to go looking for porridge. Thank you.

[ozsaur.livejournal.com]

You write lovely schmoop. This seems very real to me, I've had these kinds of half asleep conversations. Wonderful!

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

Me too. I think I was actually sleepy when I came up with the idea, and the feeling stuck. Thanks!

[tobyfan.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmmmmmmmmm. That just hit the spot. I'm feeling all warm and cozy right now. I want to snuggle with them! *g*

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

Damn, now so do I. Maybe there's room for all of us. Glad you enjoyed it.

[brooklinegirl.livejournal.com]

Schmoop away! I find nothing sweeter than stories of the boys falling asleep together. This was very, very lovely. This was a particularly nice exchange:

Not that, Frase." I can smell fruity, expensive perfume in my bed, all over him. I have a pretty good idea what the ambassador was most pleased with.

As if to reassure me, he leans forward, draping one arm across my body, settling comfortable and strong on my hip. He snuggles in against my back, and I feel him losing the conversation, falling asleep.

(contented sigh) Just very, very nice. Poor Frannie. But lucky, lucky Ray.

[dirty-diana.livejournal.com]

Very lucky Ray. Thank you!