ext_12440 ([identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-11-05 02:05 pm (UTC)

utterly, utterly brilliant! Amazing use of the language! Extraordinarily Shakespearian! Love this particularly:
Too long I tarried North, and now I find
My partner's looks and manner passing strange.
I always feared I might wind up deranged


So very, very...Shakespeare. And Fraser. And perfect.

And this had me laughing out loud:
But this Ray's fair of head, and arms, and gait.
It's true I've never been what you'd call "straight,"


I love it!


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