ext_81585 ([identity profile] themoo37.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-11-05 06:04 pm (UTC)

Brilliant

By God's Hooks, this is brilliant.The rhyme, the meter, the sentence breaks mid-line. It's all there.

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