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ds_flashfiction2004-05-27 09:55 pm
pixiecatfish.livejournal.com) wrote in ds_flashfiction2004-05-27 09:55 pm
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For the transportation challenge
Phew, just made the deadline!
At 285 words, I offer:
“I can’t believe we’re on a train. Again. With the Musical Ride. Again.”
Ray was in full gripe mode, and Benny was trying his hardest to hold onto his patience as he followed Ray through the empty stable car.
Quite frankly, he didn’t see what Ray had to complain about. This was actually a cushy assignment for Ray, his ‘babysitting a bunch of Mounties’ as Lt. Welsh put it, considered something of a reward.
“Now Ray, it’s not bad at all. We’re not chasing terrorists this time, or facing a nuclear device about to detonate, and you were actually able to walk onto the train at the station, rather than jumping onto it from a bridge.”
Benny smiled at Ray, raising one eyebrow.
“Don’t try that look with me, Benny,” Ray grumbled, although he was starting to mellow already.
“Almost everything is different than last time,” Benny said, and turned to walk away.
“You bet your ass it is,” Ray said.
He grabbed Benny and turned him around, pressing him up against one of the stables. Pressing his body against Benny’s, Ray kissed him.
Benny froze in surprise for a second, then eagerly returned the kiss, slipping his tongue into Ray’s mouth.
Ray parted Benny’s legs with his knee and rubbed his leg back and forth against Benny’s cock. Benny moaned deep in his throat and grabbed Ray’s hips, pulling him even closer.
Finally Ray broke the kiss and Benny slumped against him, resting his head on Ray’s shoulder.
Ray pulled away and straightened Benny’s lanyard, then his Stetson, and smiled at him; a mixture of triumph and desire showing on his face. “And that, Benton Fraser, is how you kiss someone on a train.”
At 285 words, I offer:
“I can’t believe we’re on a train. Again. With the Musical Ride. Again.”
Ray was in full gripe mode, and Benny was trying his hardest to hold onto his patience as he followed Ray through the empty stable car.
Quite frankly, he didn’t see what Ray had to complain about. This was actually a cushy assignment for Ray, his ‘babysitting a bunch of Mounties’ as Lt. Welsh put it, considered something of a reward.
“Now Ray, it’s not bad at all. We’re not chasing terrorists this time, or facing a nuclear device about to detonate, and you were actually able to walk onto the train at the station, rather than jumping onto it from a bridge.”
Benny smiled at Ray, raising one eyebrow.
“Don’t try that look with me, Benny,” Ray grumbled, although he was starting to mellow already.
“Almost everything is different than last time,” Benny said, and turned to walk away.
“You bet your ass it is,” Ray said.
He grabbed Benny and turned him around, pressing him up against one of the stables. Pressing his body against Benny’s, Ray kissed him.
Benny froze in surprise for a second, then eagerly returned the kiss, slipping his tongue into Ray’s mouth.
Ray parted Benny’s legs with his knee and rubbed his leg back and forth against Benny’s cock. Benny moaned deep in his throat and grabbed Ray’s hips, pulling him even closer.
Finally Ray broke the kiss and Benny slumped against him, resting his head on Ray’s shoulder.
Ray pulled away and straightened Benny’s lanyard, then his Stetson, and smiled at him; a mixture of triumph and desire showing on his face. “And that, Benton Fraser, is how you kiss someone on a train.”
Hee-hee!
I'm also glad Ray is never too annoyed to want to teach Fraser how to kiss someone . . . ahem . . . him on a train.
Thanks for sharing this!
Re: Hee-hee!
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Oh wow
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Absolutely. Practice makes perfect.
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